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[The Passion of Inglor]

NOOOOOOO

Poor Inglor! What a horrible, cruel thing to do to a defensless panda... :-(

MessiahClock responds:

But it's in the scripture, haven't you read "the book"? and by book I mean the Flash Help Bible.

[Rush 2 ++]

Great job!

Awesome FBF work! I really loved it...

There were just a few times when i thought it was too sloppy, or unrealistic, like when the two people are falling, and one pulls out an umbrella and catches the other one.

1: Obviously the umbrella would reverse... it wouldn't stay like that
2: If he tried to catch her, even if you presumed that he could some how grip her hand, his and her arm would both break before he'd be able to catch her.

[Foamy: Hurricane Special]

Alright, you know what?

I'm a huge fan of the Neurotically Yours series. I love foamy.

But this was over the top. Usually when you have foamy ranting, it's somewhat okay because you animate him moving (and recently you had been animating more and more frames as it seemed to me). However, regardless of what's going on, this should not have been submitted to Newgrounds. This is fine to be on your website, but Newgrounds' portal system is for animations and games. Yours was neither. The sound file would've been fine if you had animated foamy like you usually do. I don't really understand why you didn't, except that you wanted to rush it... but I don't think it's worth it.

I understand Wade/Tom putting this on the front page. I have nothing against that.

What I hate is that it currently has a 3.7. I've seen utter shit with 1.8s submitted to the portal that had more effort than this.

Like I said, I am a huge supporter of foamy, but mass fifening of animations like this is completely unfair to the animations you could be butting out of awards in which the author worked very hard on his/her animation. That doesn't seem fair to me.

I would think you would understand this, being an animator yourself and having to start from scratch as well.

I'm severely disappointed.

[Xionic Revolution]

Great job and congratulations

BUT YOU FORGOT MY NAME ON THE SPECIAL THANKS LIST!!!

Hell, I spent hours helping you with the Against Fate Teaser.

REMEMBER? I spent a long time making the helicopter blades and making sure they worked and were to your liking...

I spent like an hour spellchecking the script... hell I shoulda had like a whole page in the credits for me :-(

[myPod]

Pretty damn good

But I liked 3 3ast 3 3urious better... that was fuckin hillarious.

[3DA Spaceship V 3.0]

Ehhhh

The 3d wasn't horrible, but it wasn't really advanced or anything either. I don't get why some people only make action movies in 3d... you need to learn to make things be expressive. This just wasn't very interesting to me, as it was just a ship, "flying around" after being released from it's cargo hangar or whatever. Not much animation involved... no intense modeling, no rigging, no animation within the models... no intense shading/texturing, no intense dynamics, nothing really intense or above average. This 3d was pretty average. I suggest you move on to a more advanced 3d program, like Alias's Maya (www .alias .com), because swift 3d is holding you back. You can only do so much with swift.

Xerferic responds:

I am moving on to maya. And action is like the best 3D that you can do.

[Fett's Vette]

Hmmm

I like that song a lot... I think it is hillarious... but you kinda ruined it.

Your animation was a little sketchy, the drawings weren't that good, you obviously never tested it because a lot of stuff was messed up around the edges where you thought no one could see, and you didn't even finish the song.

overall, it just wasn't graphically appealing.

Jordanog responds:

I fixed the edges. The song is so long, though...

[Skate-More]

Well

The graphics were really good, but the physics were all wrong, which is what separates the boys from the men in terms of skating vids.

You see, try jumping as high as you can. See how quickly you hit the ground again? The physics in this movie were like moon gravity. The guy stayed in the air forever, as if in slomo, but there was no indication that he moved into slomo.

Improve your physics, and you might be able to make a really good one.

[a short about pandas]

Great, except

Awesome short, except you said pandas are gay bears.

I have so many things wrong with this you can't comprehend.

1: You are being homophobic and are opressing gay rights
2: I'm just joking about number one :-D
3: Pandas kick ass... they are totally not gay.
4: Pandas rule
5: Pandas rule
6: Pandas rule
7: Pandas rule
8: Pandas rule
9: Pandas rule
10: pandas rule

lol. Great flash though... too short. I love pandas.

pistoldisco responds:

Too much pandas in one single animation is not good for your health. :(

[Build Me Up Buttercup]

Hey!

First review! First vote! WOOHOO!!!

A few things: Overall it was great. A few of them sucked, but a few of them were great. ButterflySmasher has great talent.

Biggest error: Title screen and loading screen. Loading screen looks so shitty makes people want to vote 0 off the bat... not even centered loading bar and text. Everything looks bad on it.

Not an innovative title screen...

No credits at the end..

But overall it was pretty good.

NOW STOP FUCKING MAKING COLLABS!!!! :-)

SaintShun responds:

lol, dude but why just a 6? anyway i want to stop the collabs too but im afraid this is just the beggining

The Clone Was Has Begun!!