Sorry man
Sorry mred, but there were a lot of things wrong with this. 1: Why did you submit this by yourself? Wasn't this part of the parody collab or something? 2: Where was the music? No music = boring. 3: That halo text got really annoying to read, especially when you kept changing the color and size. 4: You shoulda had the plasma grenade explode after he was lying on the ground (after being shot) and off screen. You have to have a comedy end with a bang... as in a funny joke... not a cop-out. Have it explode and immediately afterwards have some music... having music during credits after a joke always works well.